Sunday 14 September 2014

The time traveling alien


The time traveling alien

 

It was 6 o’clock in the morning; Tom and Jessie were out playing with their Lego. Tom was making a skyscraper and it was going to have one hundred floors, While Tom was doing that, Jessie was building the house that she wanted when she was older.it had lots of windows and it was bigger than a mansion. When they were finished they put them both together and they loved it. Then they put away the Lego and put their creations on the shelf for display.

 

Tom said to Jessie

 “You,”know what we should do?”

“What! “She said in a loud voice.”

“We should go up in the attic after breakfast and see what

We can find.”

“It sounds like fun said Jessie.”

It was 9 O clock and Mum and Dad walked into the room. “Ok, kids let’s make pancakes,” said Dad with excitement. So Tom and Jessie made yummy pancakes with strawberries, bananas and golden syrup. After that yummy breakfast the kids went and got the ladder from Dads shed and plopped it down in front of the hole in the roof and started to climb. When they got up, they turned on the light, on the wall next to them they could see a ton of boxes full to the brim with old stuff that they didn’t need anymore. They looked at one box at a time Tom took a look at what Jessie had found. It was a brief case and in it were two devices. One of them was missing, Jessie took it in her hands but it was really heavy it had a lot of buttons on it.

 

“Should we play with it?” Tom questioned.

“Yes we should” said Jessie

“I wonder what it does? “Says Tom

“Let’s find out” said Jessie

Click….

The adventures were sucked into a dark hole it seemed to go on forever… 10 minutes later! They land smack down on the dry rocky land. They got up and looked at each other to see if they were ok Jessie was ok but Tom broke his arm on the rock right next to him. Jessie tried to help him but his arm only got worse. Right at that moment a book fell from the sky it was a journal in it was all the things that they needed to know about how to get back home. They both decided to look around for shelter, food and water but they better be careful of the persuader he has no hair and he kills t-rex’s for food.

 

They found a shelter with a banana tree that’s when they realised that the persuader had the other time traveling device because he couldn’t be here if he didn’t have one but the thing they were worried about was the fact that they couldn’t get back home. So they decided together to go look for the persuader. They used the journal to find his house but it was so far away and Jessie was getting cramps in her foot.

 

Eventually they got there but ran out of water they thought he was friendly but No! No! He wasn’t. Jessie was distracting the persuader as Tom took the persuaders device out of his pocket and Jessie took here’s and Tom shouted “PRESS THE BUTTON QUICKLY.” NO!!! Tom screamed loudly Jessie got stabbed in the leg by the persuaders spear ZAP! POW! They got teleported back home they were still in the attic were they were when they travelled back in time. The spear in Jessie’s leg had gone because the persuader touched it last and he wasn’t in the over world.

 “Should we touch anything else?” Tom whispered?

“ NO!!!” screamed Jessie…..

                             TO BE CONTINUED…….. 

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